Frinkenomics 101

I write down a few notes in my notebook. I step out of the townhouse. I take a deep breath. I hated the cold air for lifetimes after this. I hated to shiver, as if that was what led me inside the townhouse. I start to walk back up the street. The portal to the next life I am studying is ready. THE REST OF THE STORY

📚 Dual-Timeline Chapter Outline

🔷 CHAPTER 1 — The Last Walk

Protagonist’s POV (Earth)
We meet the protagonist on her walk through the neighborhood. The encounter with the elderly woman. The murder. She realizes she's dead. Confusion and terror set in.

🔶 CHAPTER 2 — The Waiting Room

Protagonist’s POV (Afterlife)
She floats. She panics. She ends up in the metaphysical communication hub. Introduced to the afterlife bureaucracy. Meets the helper. Tries to contact her parents — fails. Introduced to the “noise” of Earth.

🔷 CHAPTER 3 — The Wrong Message

Raquelle’s POV (Earth)
We meet Raquelle. She has an unusual dream. She gets a weird chill or emotional hit when near a case file or news story. Something feels “off.” We learn she’s trying to pivot into cold cases but doesn’t yet trust her intuition.

🔶 CHAPTER 4 — The Unseen Response

Protagonist’s POV (Afterlife)
She sees her killer text her mom. Panic. Horror. Rage. She tries to intervene again. She sees her friend Jessica — nothing works. She begins to understand the limitations of the system.

🔷 CHAPTER 5 — Static and Signals

Raquelle’s POV
Raquelle starts researching local missing person cases. Finds a social media comment thread that draws her attention. Starts a blog post. Finds strange overlaps between dream symbols and real clues.

🔶 CHAPTER 6 — The Communication Center

Protagonist’s POV
She explores the Communication Room. Tries contacting the detective. Gets hints of others trying to reach loved ones. Starts forming alliances with other spirits. Introduced to spirit guides. Meets Roger.

🔷 CHAPTER 7 — Thread of a Name

Raquelle’s POV
She finds a case file that makes her feel cold. Roger nudges her (maybe via a symbol, dream, or even electrical interference). She’s hesitant to act. Readers learn she had a psychic ability as a child.

🔶 CHAPTER 8 — Missing Pieces

Protagonist’s POV
Memory loss begins. She can’t recall her name. Desperately tries to hold on. She leaves her file with the spirit guide group. Roger reassures her. She sees Raquelle from beyond and tries to send a dream.

🔷 CHAPTER 9 — The Veil Thins

Raquelle’s POV
She has a powerful dream. She hears a voice say “Jefferson Street” or sees a number 628. She wakes up shaken. Her blog readers begin sending her tips. A strange coincidence links a tip to the street where the murder happened.

🔶 CHAPTER 10 — The Pattern

Protagonist’s POV
She discovers she’s not the only one murdered this way. She and other spirits trace a pattern — same method, same setup. It’s a serial killer. The bureaucracy wants her to move on, but she refuses.

🔷 CHAPTER 11 — The Search Begins

Raquelle’s POV
She starts vlogging or posting about the pattern. Gets pushback. Someone threatens her online. But Roger helps her tune in. She follows her gut — finds the house. Her post goes viral.

🔶 CHAPTER 12 — The Finding

Dual POV — Climax
Raquelle leads the detective to the house. The body is found. The killer tries to flee. The protagonist watches her own remains discovered. Her name is spoken aloud. The signal finally clears. Peace.

A compelling premise:

A murder victim trapped between worlds
A unique afterlife bureaucracy with communication breakdowns
A spirit guide (Roger!) and a living person (Raquelle) who can help — if they connect in time

📚 What you’d need to expand into a novel:

1. Character Development

Protagonist: Flesh out who she was before the murder. What did she want in life? What relationships mattered? This will help readers feel more invested.
Raquelle: Develop her arc. Maybe she’s skeptical of her intuitive gifts at first, or she’s struggling with doubt and burnout. Make her growth parallel the protagonist’s journey.
The Killer: What's his backstory? Why does he do this? Is he part of a pattern or a one-off? Add tension by revealing his movements on Earth.
The Detective: Give him a side arc — personal flaws, a past case he failed to solve, or a reason this case hits differently.

2. Worldbuilding

Expand the metaphysical world:
- What are the rules of the veil?
- Can others cross over accidentally?
- Are there consequences for staying too long or meddling too much?
Maybe introduce a lost souls department, or rogue spirit guides who break rules to get justice.

3. Plot Structure

You could use a dual-timeline structure like this:

Past/present on Earth: Raquelle investigates the murder, led by clues nudged by the protagonist
Afterlife POV: The protagonist tries to send clearer messages, discovers other spirits, and unravels bigger truths

4. Rising Stakes

The killer might strike again
The protagonist’s memory could start to fade
The connection to Raquelle weakens or grows more erratic
There’s a limited window before the protagonist must either move on or be lost forever

5. Ending Options

Bittersweet: She helps solve her case but must move on
Hopeful: She becomes a helper spirit for Raquelle
Twist: The killer has ties to the afterlife network (a corrupted medium? rogue psychic?)

💡 Title Ideas:

Through the Veil
Echo Beyond
Static
Unheard
The Silent Witness

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I needed a break. I got up and before I could step away from my desk, the helper was next to me. "Come with me," the person said.

We walked through the big conference room to the other side where the spirit guides gathered. We stepped in and stood in front of the hostess station.

"What are we doing here?" I asked. "I am tired and ready to give up. It might be time. I left my case file with the detective and I have done everything I can to get through to my mom."

The person turned to me. "You can always leave an impression here and move on. But it is not as strong of a signal when there is communication."

"OK," I sighed.

"There are people who work on cases outside of the detective and there are people that can hear their spirit guides better than others. This group here is the spirit guides for someone named Rachel. This is Roger. He communicates most frequently with her."

I walked up to him. "Roger, you are able to talk with someone on Earth?" I asked, a little incredulously. "How? They don’t understand anything."

Roger laughed. "That is true," he said with a strong Italian accent. "I don’t know how Raquelle understands me, but she does. She ignores me on purpose, often, but can still hear me when she chooses."

"Can you tell her to find me?" I asked.

"I can," Roger replied. "She will not be able to find you immediately. She is working on opening up the channels needed to be able to execute missing person searches properly."

"What does she need?" I asked. "How long until she is ready? Why can’t you just tell her my name?" I asked. "What is your name?" Roger asked.

"I’m... um, my name is..." I turned to the helper. "Why can’t I remember my own name?" I gasped. "I am... me. I am... fuck, how do I not remember?"

I turned to Roger and asked, "How will you know when she sees my case?"

"Oh, I have a map," said Roger. "It will send a signal. I will call you as soon as she looks at it."

"Has she found anyone yet?" I asked.

"Well... so the problem is I have been prodding Raquelle to start looking for people her whole life, but things came up and we are back on track. She has reviewed and studied many cases. There is an entire room full of people that are awaiting her skills to be utilized."

"What is she doing now? Can I talk to her?" I asked. "Do I need to go to my computer to speak with her?"

"No," Roger replied. "She can hear you now. She is driving. And listening."

"Tell her I am waiting for her to find me, so I can be set free."

"She heard you," Roger replied.

I sat down and took a deep breath. I guessed now I had to wait.

It was a crisp cool day in November. The sun was shining, but the air was cold and biting. The leaves that remained on the branches, still clinging to Autumn, were almost all turned yellow and red, but they were still there on the tree limbs. I was walking down the sidewalk on a quiet street lined with trees and townhomes, headed into town for lunch. I saw an elderly woman walking slowly up ahead of me a ways. I drifted off into thought for a few minutes. I came back to reality as I got closer to the old woman. I did not want to startle her so I slowed my pace a little bit. She was carrying a blue reusable grocery bag, and a little brown purse in the crook of her right elbow. She wore a nice navy blue peacoat and white pants. I continued my slow pace behind her. As we approached the next grouping of townhomes, I looked up at them. They were brown with small windows upstairs and down. There was a little porch for each one, and a small concrete walkway that cut straight to the sidewalk. As we approached the first walkway the old lady turned and shuffled onto the concrete walkway. She glanced up towards me and made eye contact with me. I guess she could hear me behind her. All of the sudden she let out a loud cry! AHHH!. OWW! She gripped her elbow, and held it tight against her. She looked up at me as I trotted up to her. "What happened?" I asked....trying to assess the situation. "Oh my elbow, it slipped out of socket!" She said. She moved her hand away from her elbow. Even through the thick blue peacoat, I could see the arm extend a little too far down at the bend of her elbow. "Let me help you with your bags." I said. She let me gently pull her bags off her arm. She shuffled up the step to her door, and with her left hand she fished around in her pocket and found her house keys. She got the door open and we stepped inside. It was a small place. The entrance to the stairs was right in front of me. To my left was two closed doors and to my right was the living room. The old lady shuffled into the living room past the couch to the chair that was already pulled out at the table. There was an old man on the couch. He was dressed in a suit and his head was resting on a pillow on the arm of the couch. He had a black hat on and it was pulled down over his eyes. "You just put those bags on the floor there." She pointed to kitchen floor just around the corner of the room. I walked the bags over, trying to be quiet for her napping husband. I turned toward her and said "do you want me to call an ambulance for you?" She shook her her head, no. "If you could just help me get my coat off, that will do just fine." I walked up to her with my back to the old man asleep on the couch. I was helping her stand up from her chair, when I felt something behind me. I turned around and the old man was standing behind me; towering over me by a solid foot. I gasped and started to apologize for waking him, when I realized he was not old. I stared at him for a few seconds as my thoughts started to process what was happening, and the fear started to rise in my throat. My mind started to race through a million thoughts trying to reason with myself and calm the panic I was starting to feel. I continued to stare at him, unsure of what to say. My mouth was dry, I could feel my fingertips tingling with fear. "I...I.........I am s..sorry I woke you up" I stammered. My voice cracking a little as I tried to get the words out. He said nothing. He didn't move. He was standing so close to me I could feel the exhales of his breath through his nose. His eyes were still, and cold, his face was emotionless. I tried to step back and felt my leg hit the chair behind me. I finally remembered the old lady and slowly turned to look at her. She was still old. She stood there with a slight smirk in her face, at least I think it was a smirk. She was still holding her elbow as if it hurt, but she didn't say anything. "Is this your son?" I asked. My voice shaking a little. "What is going on?" "I should get going." The words were tumbling out of my mouth as a sinking realization started to wash over me. I look at the man, then back to the old lady. I see the flash of the knife in the man's hand. I felt the knife sink into my gut. I step aside and look at me standing there. This is how that life ended. I had wondered if the answers were in the moments leading up to my death, or if I would have to work backwards from here. I took another step away from the man. I am happy he can't see me this time. I watch my body slump to the floor.

I stood there for awhile staring down at my body lying on the floor. I tried hard to move my fingers and toes. I felt like I was breathing yet it was effortless. But I could not get myself back to being on the floor. I watched the man wrap my body up in a tarp and carry me out of the room. I watched him carry me down the stairs to his basement. I started to feel more panic as I start to realize I might not connect to my body again. This might be it. I I start to float higher like a hot air balloon. I start yelling and kicking and screaming and grabbing at the air.

Nothing happens. No sounds, no sensations besides my fear anger, and sadness. I scream and cry until I just can't anymore. I must fall asleep as I am floating, because when I wake up I am in a room with a movie theater size TV. The first person I see, I walk up to and ask, "can you hear me?" He turns to me and says "yes of course. Welcome to the other side of the veil. How are you feeling?" "Like shit" I reply. "How do I get back to ....earth?" as I motion toward the screen. "Oh that takes a little time. There is the planning room down the hall." "I don't want to plan, I want to go back to the one I was just at." I reply. "Oh, he says quietly . you can't, you died. Your body died." "But what if I am never found? I have to stay connected somehow. I need to be sure my parents know what happened to me. Its not fair, I need to tell them."

"The communication area in down the hall, but good luck its REALLY loud on earth. Nobody hears anything down there." The person says. I take a deep breath and walk down the hall. I see a sign that says communication center, I push the double doors open. And the room seems infinite. I can't see the end of the room nor the sides. The room is full of people, screens and keyboards clacking. There is someone standing by the doorway. I walk up to them, and say "I need to get a message to my parents. apparently I died on earth and I need to make sure my body is found so my parents will be ok. Can you help me?" "Of course" the person replies. He walks us down a path between the computer stations until we reach an empty one. "Ok how to I use this?" I ask. "Well you find the person you want to send a message to and then you use different things around them to send them a message. If you need to search for person you don't know, you can ask here in this section. Good luck, people there can't hear much." "Yeah, I heard that already." I say. I sit down and type in Mom. I zoom in and can see my mom and dad sitting on their couch. They don't know I am gone yet. ugh. Ok, how to I tell my parents I am dead? I start typing into the communication box: mom, can you hear me? I hit the enter button and wait. I don't really know what I am waiting for. My mom picks up her phone and looks at it. "She hasn't called yet tonight, I'm surprised." she says to my dad. He shrugs and says "well she is probably working or hanging out with friends. You can't expect her to call every day." "I know" she says with a sigh and puts down her phone. I type in the box: call me and hit enter. I wait for my mom to respond. nothing. Mom, call me. I type and hit enter. I wait again. My mom picks up her phone. "I'm just gonna text her." She types a message to me. Somehow I am able to zoom in and read it. Hi its mom, just checking in. love you. She hits send. I see the image zoom to my phone. Its sitting on the table in the house I just died in. I feel cold and sick to my stomach. I see the man pick up the phone. He must have unlocked it with my fingerprint. I see him start to respond to the message. "NOOOOO!!! STOP!!!! "I scream at the screen. Love you too mom, im super tired tonight, just chilling in bed. He hits send on the message. My moms phone dings. She picks it up and reads it. She smiles and says "oh honey you were right, she is at home." I start typing furiously into the communication box. Mom that wasn't me that was someone else. I never go to bed right now. I didn't put a heart emoji at the end of my sentence you have to know that's not me MOMMM!! you have to listen to me! I hit enter on the keyboard and wait. and wait, and wait. Nothing. My mom and dad get up and go to bed after the movie they are watching. Ok think think think. Who else can I tell. Ooh my friend jessica. I type in her name and she appears on the screen. Jessica can you hear me? I type and hit enter. She is at dinner with friends from work. nothing. I hear static. Ok this isnt working. I get up and go back to the person at the entrance. "I can't get anyone to hear me. What do I do now?" I ask. "Well you can wait until morning and try again." "OK do I need to go sleep or eat or something?" I ask. "No" the person laughs. "you just scroll the timeline. you can move it back and forth. Its not linear here." I went and sat back down at the screen. I had the next few days off from work so there would not be any red flag there. My main hope was my mom. I typed into the box: mom can you hear me? I died, I need you to find me. I hit enter. The words swirled around on the screen and turned into what seemed like random images. This must be my mom's dream. It's me driving in a car telling her I'm dead. in the dream she is crying. Fingers crossed she understands the message. I roll fast forward on the timeline to morning. She gets up and looks at her phone. she looks again at the message from my phone. Good morning, can you call me? she texts and hits send. She turns to my dad and tells him she had a bad dream and doesn't feel good. He gets up and says he will grab her some coffee. The man who killed me turned off my phone. The message to me stayed on delivered. Mom went to work. I typed messages to her all day. Just static responses. As she left work she opened her cell and called me. The phone went straight to voicemail. The static stopped. I started typing again. Mom please check on me. Go to my house. She called my dad and said she was going to run some errands before heading home. Instead, she drove to my house. I can't tell if she heard me or not. I see her calling the police. Everything seems to move a little faster. they search the house. the officer takes notes. I fast forward through a few days. The Detective seems to be on the right path to finding me. He keeps driving past the house I died in. I just need to figure out how to tell him. I seemed to get my mom to understand. She keeps telling the detective I didn't run away, didn't do drugs, and that I must be held captive in a house somewhere. I zoom in on the detective. He is studying the case file. I start typing Hi can you hear me? It's me, the person you are currently looking for. I'm in a house. I hit enter and wait to see if he can hear me. There is no static, so I am hoping he can. The person that helped me with the computer walks up behind me. "You know you can click on items in and around the person you are trying to communicate with and use those if they have energy flowing through them." "Oh like the TV?" I ask. "Yes." he says. I click on the TV. I type in the box: I'm in a house. Can you hear me? The next commercial is a hearing aid commercial with a man in front of a house that has the same colors as the one I died in. I start to get excited as he stares at the TV. Maybe he gets it! I think. He grabs his phone and opens his texts. He starts typing Hey! we should get a house soon, I just saw a commercial that reminded me that I wanted to tell you that. He hits send and puts his phone down. I heave a deep sigh and turn to the person helping me. "Is all communication this hard?" The person nods. "Yes, it can be challenging until you find someone who truly hears. Keep trying, maybe some of the message will get through." I spend the next week, then month, then three months typing messages to the detective. I tried to give him the address, I showed him the color of the house, I sent basement images. He noticed everything yet didn't put anything together. I even got clear tarps to fall in front of him at Home Depot. The address was on every license plate, the cost of gas. My mom seemed to have heard me and kept insisting I was inside someone's home. He even pulled over IN FRONT OF THE HOUSE I DIED IN to respond to my mom's text.

Expand on the end for the parents

I watch in anguish as the direction of my parent's lives shift completely. I sit back in my chair and think. It's been months since I left. No one is understanding the messages. It's like charades and pictionary together with a wall in between the players. Who else can I try? I think back to my time on earth. I snap my fingers. John Edwards!

I type his name in. Meeting room 4 is the message that pops up on my screen. The person from the door way comes over to me. "Follow me" the person says. I get up and we walk through a door that didn't seem to be there a few minutes ago. There are hundreds of people in the room. There are seats but people are milling around. "What is this?" I ask. "Everyone hopes to get a message through. People like John Edwards tune in and everyone starts typing at once. If the person they are connected to on earth is near to him their message gets bolded. He can hear it better." The person explains. "Ugh, ok so if the detective or my mom isn't seeking him out he probably won't hear me." I say dejectedly. "Unfortunately yes," the person responds. "Are all of them like this?" I ask. "The big psychics. Yes." The person replies. "Have you tried spirit guides yet? sometimes they are more successful." "No" I reply. "What's a spirit guide and where are they?" "Follow me" the person says.

We walk through the room and exit into another large open area. It looks like a bunch of starbucks lounge areas, with groups of people at each one. Some of them only have 2-3 people some have 6-7 people. There is what looks like a hostess stand in front of us. The person motions to come over to it. "Here is where you can look up the group. Let's type in Mom and hit enter." The person explains. The group in front of us seems to morph into a different group. "This is your mom's spirit guides." I walk up to them. "Can you get a clear message to my mom?" I ask. "We can try. What is the message?" One of them asks. "I can be found at 628 Jefferson street in the basement." I reply. "Oooooooh That's tough." one of the group says. "Super clear details are very hard to get through. We can get the 6 and Jefferson but the rest gets lost. We will try though." "Ok, thank you." I reply. I walk back to the hostess stand and type in the detectives name. I watch as the groups blend and change until the group in front of me is clear. I walk up the new group and ask, if they are the spirit guides for the detective. "Yes ma'am" they reply in unison. "Can you get him a message?" I ask. They all break out in hearty laughter, "Have you met this man?" one of them asks. "No, I have only seen him through the veil." I reply. "We have been trying to give him guidance on your case. so far, no luck." "Do all of his cases ask for help?" I ask. "No, some are happy to cut ties and move on. Some give up, some have other things that weigh heavier on them to communicate with the otherside.

We have a few that we keep their case files here and when we feel like there might be a chance he will hear us, we open the file and pull them to us." "Can I leave a case file with you?" I ask. "Yes ma'am. Just touch the corner of the table here and it will be here." I reach over and touch the corner and sure enough a grey case file appears on the table. I turn to the Helper. "What about a broad search of people that might be able to hear me that know either my mom or the detective? Can I find them and send a message?" The person points back to the desk I was at. "Just zoom out. It will show you if anyone near them can hear you." I go and sit back down. It feels like it has been a whole year of trying to get people to hear me but it has only been a few days as far as I can tell. On earth it has now been 6 months. I continue to send messages and practice different ways to get my message across. I try everyone I can think of, and everyone that they know. It all ends up garbled, ignored or mistranslated. I wish I could just step through the veil and write a note. Would they even believe what they saw?

I need a break. I get up and before I can step away from my desk the Helper is next to me. Come with me the person says. We walk through the big conference room to the other side where the spirit guides gather. We step in and stand in front of the hostess station. "What are we doing here?" I ask. "I am tired and ready to give up. It might be time. I left my case file with you and I have done everything I can to get through to my mom." The person turns to me. "You can always leave an impression here and move on. But it is not as strong of a signal when there is communication." "OK" I sigh. "There are people who work on cases outside of the detective and there are people that can hear their spirit guides better than others. This group here is the spirit guides for someone named Svea. This is Roger. he communicates most frequently with her." I walk up to him. "Roger, you are able to talk with someone on earth?" I ask a little incredulously. "How? they don't understand anything." Roger laughs "that is true." He says with a strong italian accent. "I don't know how Svea understands me but she does. She ignores me on purpose, often, but can still hear me when she chooses." " Can you tell her to find me?" I ask. "I can." Roger replies. "She will not be able to find you immediately. She is working on opening up the channels needed to be able to execute missing person searches properly." "What does she need?" I ask. "How long until she is ready? Why can't you just tell her my name?" I ask.

"What is your name?" Roger asks. "I'm......um, my name is....." I turn to the helper. "Why can't I remember my own name?" I gasp. "I am...me. I am .....fuck how do I not remember?" I turn to Roger and ask "How will you know when she sees my case?" " Oh I have a map" says Roger. "It will send a signal. I will call you as soon as she looks at it." "Has she found anyone yet?" I ask. "Wellll, so the problem is I have been prodding Svea to start looking for people her whole life, but things came up and we are back on track. She has reviewed and studied many cases. There is an entire room full of people that are awaiting her skills to be utilized." "What is she doing now? Can I talk to her?" I ask. "Do I need to go to my computer to speak with her?" "No" Roger replies. "She can hear you now. She is driving. and listening." "Tell her I am waiting for her to find me, so I can be set free." "She heard you" Roger replied.

I sit down and take a deep breath. I guess now I wait.